I wrote this poem in my 20s and it appeared in my grad thesis. It’s one of the poems I wrote in my 20s I still feel fery loving toward. So it is pretty much done, but there are some lingering word choice questions. Every time I re-read it, I change one or two words and them change them back or to something else the next time. If you spot them let me know and if you have useful feedback, plaease share:

Ideology

You can’t / Lie down without turning your back / On someone.”
– James Galvin, Testimony”

  1. We lunch pleasantly
    Converse pleasantly
    Drink pleasant drinks
    But do not bother to smile.
    In the middle of the table
    Beside the ketchup
    Sits a plate of compromise

  2. Should we live like painters—
    Right up against the canvas?
    “I know there is a forest around
    Here somewhere,” you laugh
    But a tear breaks loose.
    You never learned
    Passion is the dormitory of the young
    Most your brethren moved long ago
    To their own suburban spaces
    But you wake In the night burning cold
    From a nightmare where you bite
    your own wrist gnawing
    through ropes of compromise.

  3. You ache at the bone
    Long empty words rattle
    your tendons droop like windsocks
    When someone saves your life
    You are obligated to save another
    But you can’t stop
    Running to and fro with your net and pliers
    Catching every bird that falls from the sky
    Pulling every thorn from every paw lifted
    In your direction wears you and builds you
    Like a sea wall,
    Yet you are afraid to stop looking down
    Afraid you might trip over the compromise
    Delivered daily to your door.

  4. Can one play chess without forfeiting pieces–
    Letting each pawn die in combat
    Unattached to a gambit’s string?
    Don’t be idealistic,
    It’s the same as being naïve.
    You want to throw your body in front of regulations?
    This is only paper
    This is only a meeting
    Sit down, calm yourself
    I’ll bring you some coffee
    And a nice slice
    of frosted compromise



Posted on February 24, 2023





Next post all the Birds This poem has had a lot of tense changes. I’d love to hear what words, phrases, or images are working or not working. look down on me except the